Peach October 18th, 2008
Last year I went to a writers convention . What sticks in my mind is the phrase “The Readership Market is Shrinking, yet the number of writers and publishers is growing. What does that mean to you and me? It means we have a lot of books to wade through before we can find a really good book.
Once a genre becomes popular suddenly we become deluged with that type of book. Case in point Harry Potter was a mega hit and now we have children fantasy falling off the shevles. For adult women, if you want to get published write a paranormal romance. Vampires - not since Bram Stoker’s Dracula have Vampires looked so desirable.
We already know why the readership market is shrinking, we no longer have to depend on books and magazines to keep us entertained. We long ago entered the world of electronic age, PDA’s, DVD’s, CD’s, HDTV’s, XBOX all keeping our mind entertained. In some cases there is the “why read the book when I can watch the movie”
With writers on the rise and publishers out there just hoping for another Julie Garwood or J.K. Rowling you would hope for some high quality product as well. Thing is I don’t see it. Where are the editors, the impartial tweekers, the voice of reason that doesn’t mind the use of the red pen?
I want to talk about fluff. Nothing looses me like fluff. I start mentally editing a book when I see line after line of flowering prose, puking adjectives as if the writer was in love with the writen word rather than taking the reader down the shortest path to get to the intended purpose. J.K. Rowling, her first book started out with a mere 309 pages, her last 749 pages she seemed to fall in love with her ability to write more than for what she was saying. Goblet of Fire and Order of the Phoenix was filled with so much fluff you could have easily shaved off half of the 1,616 papes. Lord of the Rings is 1,137 pages for 3 books thanks to good editing, a masterpiece. My first boulder sized tome (905 pages) was Centennial, a novel by James Michener. It spanned one hundred years. No fluff.
Don’t get me wrong one mans fluff is another mans literary treasure. I just finished a series by Stephanie Meyer. A very popular paranormal romance series. When she wrote the first book “Twilight” a lofty book of 563 pages she had no idea it would become popular, with a bit of editing it was called a “teen romance”. It seems books for tweens and teens are filled with fluff, the Twilight series totals 2,444 pages (4 books) and believe it or not the Harry Potter series has a total of 4,097 pages (7 books).
Whats my point? If the books are selling well who cares how many pages? I think publishers are rushing books to get them out on the market without doing a good job of editing them first. There is to much fluff in modern books. Homers Odessey 331 pages, War and Peace 1,400 pages spanning 8 years. Order of the Phonix spanning one year 869 pages… using more words to say less.